After printing my magazine I realised that they font was to small, I have therefore made it smaller and will be adding on more writing to fill in the spaces. I have also added black blocks to my magazine as I thought that this was effective in my research as it is done in other magazines and it does make it look better and less like just a lot of writing.  I also added pop ups of text to show the audience the most important things in the text and this will then keep them more interested in what they are reading. I also made the headline shorter so that it looked more effective and wasn't to long.