This double page spread out of, 'Uncut', has a lot of text. It does look slightly overloaded and could do with a few more images to make it look better. A reader may see this as to much written on one page and it is not sectioned off well enough towards the end of the article and a reader may get bored before they have even read it, I will take this into consideration when making my magazine. I also do not like the text on the page and i think that the font could look better. On the headline, ' feedback ', I think that if the fonts were different it could look a lot better as a whole. I also don't feel as though there is enough colour on the page so it is not eye catching to the reader.
This is out of q magazine. I like this as it is not dull looking. There are a lot of images used of the artist and they are are of her looking as though she is having a good time rather than just posing for a photo as she is laughing in them. Also there are people in the background of one of the images and this shows that she is working with people and this makes it a lot more informal, and the sort of people who read q magazine will be looking for this in what they read about. Also the writing in this looks good as it it sectioned of into rows which will keep the reader interested. There is a lot of colour on the double page spread also so this is going to make it very eye catching to the reader and they will like what they see better in comparison to there only being one colour, there is a lot of red used also which is a bright, happy effective colour.




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